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we can't be saved anymore, we will not come back

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We late to save the, we do not go back by ymymy
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

To start, I LOVE this. I love the painterly look, the strokes, the colour choices. I noticed that the wound on the black-haired girls chest seems to 'spurt' a little, for lack of a better term. While I'm not sure if it was truly intentional, I really like it as a hidden touch to make the wounds more real. The bright blue angel eyes look great. I love the bloodshot look (vis-à-vis Cass when Rowena spelled him into a murderous rage). The demon eyes I wish were blacker, they seem to get a little lost, and I find I focus more on the brighter blue eyes.
Regarding the animation of the eyes, I wish they stayed popped open a bit longer before beginning to close again, give the viewer more time to be shocked by it. I'm not 100% sure about the eye lids closing, as I can see frames where the lids appear transparent and the iris is visible through them. I'm not sure if this is due to the frames, or that lack of capability on DA's part as far as uploading large .GIF files. I would consider trying to make the transition smoother and to look more natural. All in all this, is a great concept and a wonderful piece!